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Splinters
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:26:42 AM in AEST
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Why is it that lately
It seems like
Everything I am
And everything
I ever thought I was
Is broken
And everything I touch
Falls to splinters
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ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-11-08 08:26:42]
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Re: Splinters
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by Mihiri on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:36:17 AM AEST
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Well wrapped & neatly rounded! hehehe! I lurrrrrrrrrv short poetry! Long 'uns get me all mixed-up, wut d'u say? I like this, & I must say that I've felt the same way..
Thanx 4 the great read!
Mihiri
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Re: Splinters
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by a_bear on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:16:05 AM AEST
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| Personally, I think its shortness gets the message across better..like an explanation point. |
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Re: Splinters
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:01:43 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done. And a lot of people can relate to this one, too. |
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Re: Splinters
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:00:31 AM AEST
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this is my life right now.
it's good to know i'mnot alone
thanks for posting this poem. |
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Re: Splinters
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:13:13 PM AEST
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To the point and you don't even know me.Now where I'd put it?
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