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Reaching For Shadows
Contributed by
lost_word
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Look into these eyes
What do you see?
A little boy lost within'
An image of what once was me
I reach for open arms
Suddenly i'm froze
Maybe someone will reach back one day
Maybe someday / who knows?
I need a blessing from the highest in power
As i pop thesed pills,
and count down the final hour
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lost_word
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2002-11-20 05:00:00]
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Re: Reaching For Shadows
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:01:53 AM AEST
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| wow, i love it. i really like the title, and the last bit. very well done |
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Re: Reaching For Shadows
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:00:37 AM AEST
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| Great little write! i liked this even though it was sad at the end!Christina |
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Re: Reaching For Shadows
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:48:07 AM AEST
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| oi pa... freaky write. sad, but good. interesting. i like. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Reaching For Shadows
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:29:10 PM AEST
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This is beautifully written
i still like the way you separate the
words using the / in there, i'm glad
this isnt true, i'd be very upset if it
was, Thanks for sharing this one
I enjoyed it, it took me back in time
in my own life as well.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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