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Computer Generated Lunchroom
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Quiet dark hallways,
nothing is here.
All else is running,
as I go near.
I can't help but be stung,
by your words and your pain.
Leaving the norm,
my only friend is the rain.
Robots on keyboards,
food left long ago.
Scars left unhealed,
far more then you know.
Mouses click pages,
and typing up a lost dream.
No matter where I go now,
so empty I seem.
Computer generated lunchrooms,
I file in without a sound.
No friends by my side,
I fall to the ground.
Copyright ©
2ndChance
... [
2004-11-08 13:04:02]
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Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:02:55 PM AEST
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Good write...I can identify...
Jenni |
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Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:14:04 AM AEST
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| I love you babe! Great write....I know what you mean...unfortuantly I CAN'T spend my lunch period anywhere but the lunchroom =/ oh well. Great writeThee |
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Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:30:43 PM AEST
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| Well I didn't have any (offline) when I started school, and whether it's the lunchroom or computer room I'll probably be there alone. The one real friend I had isn't going this semester. :-( But you expressed the lonliness well. Cheers! |
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Re: Computer Generated Lunchroom
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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| brilliant and well expressed. |
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