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Life of Fraud
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:14:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hatred words express true thoughts
Compassion soon will be forgot
Manifest your bitter side
The one you know and cannot hide
Do not lie and dont deny
Fury burns within your eye
You are like us after all
Now is time to take the fall
Repress your feelings, hold in your rage
You live your so called life in shame
So this is what youve now become
Your subsistent life will now succumb
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EternalNight4x
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2004-11-08 13:14:02]
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Re: Life of Fraud
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by N0body on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:49:38 PM AEST
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Hi devin, I like your work, its really good, keep posting!
(p.s Its Sara) |
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Re: Life of Fraud
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by DesperateSoul on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:58:23 AM AEST
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| eternelnightX4!! I have had so many experiences with people who lie 2 kickitand fake who they are and it makes me feelas chaotic within as your poems expresses!! the best way to it out is to write it down i always say!!!! Stay in touch with yourself and your reality and keepposting!!!! |
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Re: Life of Fraud
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by Silent_Storm on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:23:40 PM AEST
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| Wow! This poem is really good. I liked the how it rhymed and flowed really well. I also like the meaning behind it. ^_^ |
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