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Poetic Purgatory
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 01:15:01 PM in AEST
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Caged beyond my modest means,
lies the crypt of great intentions,
of gilded edges and marbled gleams,
present happiness and tall ambitions.
Within the cemetary of dead dreams,
I find my one and true salvation,
the purgatory of poetic schemes,
where sleeps unlived, my self expression.
Buried I lie soiled, unclaimed,
a soul in longing and shackled privation,
doomed forever to only glimpse,
what life is, was and future portions.
Entombed under the burdens within,
buried by stones, diverse contentions,
awaiting the end with counted chagrin,
languishing in words and poetic mentations.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-11-08 13:15:01]
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Re: Poetic Purgatory
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by a_bear on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 04:52:56 PM AEST
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| wow..nice hearing from you..been missing you baron. What a thought producing poem.. |
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Re: Poetic Purgatory
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:25:55 PM AEST
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Within the cemetary of dead dreams,
I find my one and true salvation,
the purgatory of poetic schemes,
where sleeps unlived, my self expression
I can relate to that stanza so much. A great
poem that took what I am struggling with and
put it into words. I honestly don't know what to
say except thank you for sharing this and I
hope this poem is not truly how you are
feeling.
Bobo (Joel) |
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