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I can't go...
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 02:43:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can't go
Another day
Another minute
Another second
Without you here
I can't go
Another day
Another minute
Another second
Without a tear
I can't go
Another day
Another minute
Another second
Without you by my side
I can't go
Another day
Another minute
Another second
Without getting stuck in the life behind
Copyright ©
Kitty_cat
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2004-11-08 14:43:16]
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Re: I can't go...
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:57:58 PM AEST
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| very deep very good.. |
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Re: I can't go...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 05:41:38 PM AEST
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Mmm...Intersting. Could use some more variety of words but I do like the repetition, I have many poems like that. Good job,
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