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Statistic...
Contributed by
Roshie
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A home destroyed, a cut so deep,
A heart so broken, many tears they weep.
Love is forgotten, so lost and alone,
The girl walks quietly, her name unknown.
Her family ruind, her heart now broken,
Her mind in pain, no words are spoken.
With innocence lost, scars are unseen,
There is no love, or so it seemed.
Mother never loved her, Father never there,
Hatred forming in her, nobody cares.
One hit, no more pain, two no more mind,
Three world is spinning, money she must find.
Body being sold, none can stop her now,
If only someone would help, if only she knew how.
One more hit, and now her life will fade,
This isn't suicide, there is no blade.
Someone finds her, alone and lifeless,
Her body destroyed, life is priceless.
No one to tell her, she will be missed,
Just another statistic to be dismissed.
Copyright ©
Roshie
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2002-11-20 06:20:00]
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Re: Statistic...
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:57:39 AM AEST
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| very well writen,very sad too Great write! Christina |
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Re: Statistic...
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:55:40 AM AEST
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| whoa... eye opener, so sad so true. good write. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Statistic...
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:57:31 PM AEST
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Ahh i'm still crying from the last
poem i read lol geez this is such a
sad write, I really enjoyed this one
as well it's so full of reality and truth
Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Statistic...
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 04:10:27 PM AEST
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Oh Roshie'
What a beautiful but frightening write, this is happening to too many of our young ones and it has to stop.
I hear you and I feel your pain.
So sad that one so young as you has to write of such tragedy.
But thanks, as I say, I hear you and your words are so true
Hugz,
Fwog |
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Re: Statistic...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 06:50:37 PM AEST
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This is so very sad.. you have such insight..and you show a lot a talent...keep up the good work...
Jenni |
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Re: Statistic...
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:13:12 AM AEST
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keep all the neat
poems coming
yo are so blessed
to have the gift of
writing ciao for now .
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Re: Statistic...
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by adsalamon on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 05:59:01 AM AEST
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| thats good : ty |
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