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Left Hanging.........Again
Contributed by
AliB
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Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 04:26:09 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Why is it I always have to wait?
When others get everything handed to them on a plate
Im sick of being cast aside, like Im not really here
Dont worry, shell wait, she did last year
I am a strong person, usually say how I feel
But I still get forgotten, the rough end of the deal
Must learn to speak louder, and mean what I say
Only I can change me at the end of the day
Ill start putting my foot down, and not letting go
Til Im happy with the outcome, Ill learn to say No
Sort out some problems that need to be solved
Then get on with my life, a little more bold
Copyright ©
AliB
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2004-11-08 16:26:09]
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Re: Left Hanging.........Again
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:47:23 PM AEST
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Ali, this is great mate, brilliant flow and rhythm.
Are you ok, you know where I am mate. Sorry not been online much, but been busy.
Text me mate
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Left Hanging.........Again
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:15:05 PM AEST
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| this was a great write..i can relate to things in my past..your very good. |
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Re: Left Hanging.........Again
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:17:32 PM AEST
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yeah know how you feel, but you know what they say?
the best things come to those who wait!
Johnny. |
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