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Why
Contributed by
BrookeStar
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:22:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Crying,
Sobbing,
Laying face down on my bed,
My head drove into my pillow,
Trying to drown out the sound of my own cries.
Not wanting anyone to hear me,
Not even myself,
Waiting,
Wondering,
When shall the last tear fall,
Hoping that this will be over soon,
That I won't have to deal with this much longer.
Red cheeked,
Running nose,
Light streams running down my face,
Hoping for the best,
Thinking of the worst,
Why do I have to go through this?
When shall it be over or shall I make it over.
Copyright ©
BrookeStar
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2004-11-08 19:22:04]
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Re: Why
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:26:52 PM AEST
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This is a very interesting piece to me. I like.
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Re: Why
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:09:50 AM AEST
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Re: Why
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by Sholdershy on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:46:25 AM AEST
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Very good wording
I like how you refer to tears as light streams.
enjoyed reading
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