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I Say No More
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:54:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Being mad gives whole new perspective
to what brain feels as confusion
lapped up inbetween spills
of what's ultimately
worth keeping
Feeling hurt enables
the anger
to slide down the throat
of vein channel paths
too narrow
to understand what I wrote
Breathing heavily and slow
kills the vomit
that wants to flow
everytime I feel so pathetic
falling from oh so high
to low
And invalid here seems to
cross over more often than it should
allowed like normal
and pretended to feel good
I say No More, No More
but I am unable to stop
I am unable to breathe
My face is too hot
and painful feels worth it
and I like it a lot
Or so I tell me
when I see the rain on my face
I'm running invisible
like a ghost in a race
Running to lose time
in my favorite place
I have to admit
I'm losing my faith...............
Copyright ©
Red_October
... [
2004-11-08 20:54:41]
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Re: I Say No More
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:01:42 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: I Say No More
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:40:25 PM AEST
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| awesome, i love it, great write!!! |
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