|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Hold On
Contributed by
BrookeStar
on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:09:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
|
You live, you dye,
You hope, you cry,
You wape the tear from your eye.
You know your lifes just a lie ,
But you hold on.
Hold on for who,
Hold on for you,
Hold on for all you plan to do.
All your dreams can come true.
As long as you hold on.
Your life won't always be this way,
Someday it will be okay.
Just stand uo, Stand up and say,
I will live my life each and everyday.
Just hold on.
Be the best that you can be,
See all, see all you can see,
You don't need to please me,
Whatever fits you to a tee.
You can hold on.
Copyright ©
BrookeStar
... [
2004-11-08 21:09:31]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:13:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like this muchly. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:13:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| There's a scripture in the Bible (is that redundant?) anyway..it says that we will reap a reward, provided we do not tire out.. sigh. Holding on..we need a reminder like your poem when our grip is slipping..or someone has gresed the pole! Thanks. great write. |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:16:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It's a n awesome masterpeice of beuaty 'cause we all need to hold on.
If u want the moderators to check your spelling, (we all do that) jus click yes up at the top.
Keep writings 'cause u r good.
Luv, smiles, huggs,
emy
I mispell my words on purpose 'cause I choose too. I have many differnet lingo styles. |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:19:30 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| fantastic write. |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by BrookeStar on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:23:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Thanx everyone for commenting on my poem I appreciate the support greatly.
~Me~Brooke~ |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:32:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| So much said in such little text. Great write - rhyming well thought out. |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:30:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow, i love this, its great.. got me all emotional, lol |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:25:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
HOW TRUE! HOLD ON & SEE JUST WHAT YOU CAN ACHIEVE!! NICE GOING & GREAT WORK!!!
DAN!!!! |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 05:52:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautifully written inspiring hope, and feeling. cool to read and most enjoyible, thanks for sharing this awesome write. |
|
|
Re: Hold On
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:57:45 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great emotions, wonderful write,
pixie xx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
