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A MOTHERS NIGHTMARE
Contributed by
LEMMEN
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:38:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time is the thing she fears the most.
A life without him is a hell unto it's self.
Her baby,
Her flesh,
Her blood.
Death of a child,
Death of innocent.
Caused by the neglect of man.
She was unable to see his pain.
The hurt,
The loneliness.
Within her child's eye's.
She did not hear his cries,
For help,
His cries for love.
HIS CRIES,
HIS CRIES.
Until it was to late.
She saw the note nailed
to his bedroom door.
She saw it there all day.
But thought nothing of it.
Until she tried to open,
His door.
That was nailed shut from the
inside.
She screamed his name as she
read the note.
Written in his blood,
And, It read like this.
Mom you never listen to me.
Never hear what I have to
say.
My life is unimportant to
you.
Since my scares weren't enough
to get your attention,
THIS WILL.
I do love you mom.
But I can't live like this
anymore.
The voices,
The visions.
You never listen.
So I'm taking my life
this day.
I hope your happy at least I
won't mess up anymore.
And you can get on with
your life.
Since I was holding you back
anyway.
Tell Dad I love him if you ever
see him again.
LOVE YOUR SON
RON.
Her scream.
Her pain.
Her life ended at the end
of that note.
Her baby child.
She tries and tries to
break the door.
But to no avail.
Screaming anger insues.
DAMN IT, OPEN THE DOOR RON,
OPEN THE DOOR NOW.
Her word's go unheard.
Life no longer is here.
The emergency people soon arrive.
Smash down the door.
All that he owned was against
the door.
Blood splattered upon every wall
upon the floor.
Like someone tore his soul
apart.
Blood still fresh as they find
him in the tub.
She rushes in,
OH! GOD! NO! NO!
Time is the thing she fears the most>
A life without him is a hell unto it's self.
A personal hell.
A hell she will never truly
understand.
A hell she can never forgive her self
FOR.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-11-09 10:38:20]
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Re: A MOTHERS NIGHTMARE
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:48:00 AM AEST
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Amazing... So, so sad and emotional... It has a very point.
"ISN'T IT TIME FOR PEOPLE TO WAKE UP AND PAY ATTENTION TO THEIR KID'S INSTEAD OF JUST LETTINGTHEM DIE."
I just posted a poem with a similar message... It is time for people to wake up. |
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Re: A MOTHERS NIGHTMARE
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:56:19 AM AEST
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Great write... so sad... and so emotional...
it had so much truth to it... it is sad that these things have to happen
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: A MOTHERS NIGHTMARE
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:21:38 AM AEST
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this is one of the few writes that will be read over and over again.....by new and old....this is so captivating...so gruesome..it made me cry....tore at my heart...it's so damn sad......
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: A MOTHERS NIGHTMARE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:23:20 AM AEST
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| Bad mommy. Not psychic. Bad! |
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Re: A MOTHERS NIGHTMARE
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by StoneAngel on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:22:09 PM AEST
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| so sad. it made me cry, what was she thinking. I have a mother like her. You write such dark poems do u need a hug or to talk to someone? very powerful. As they said this will be read over and over again. |
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Re: A MOTHERS NIGHTMARE
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:33:55 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write. terrible that a nightmare has to occur in reality to wake people up...::sigh:: |
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