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A Hypocondriac's Message
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:47:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Cuts and crosses,
and red blood streaks.
Pondering thoughts,
and smearing my makeup.
I sit alone,
in the ceramic tub.
Hope has lost interest,
and taken over my grief.
Treating my arm like a cutter-board,
I slash numbers on the wall.
Blood-stain towels,
drenched with a hypocondriac's
psychotic message.
Scrambled entertainment,
the voices enjoy.
Screaming with laughter,
and clapping their hands.
They have taken over my life,
and ruined my blessings.
My prayers never reached Her,
never got to her hands.
I wil never be cured,
a cancer dieing in the sands.
Laugh all you want,
you can't stare anymore.
The world is perfect again,
until another cancer is born.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
... [
2004-11-09 10:47:08]
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Re: A Hypocondriac's Message
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:50:30 AM AEST
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| Such a sad write. |
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Re: A Hypocondriac's Message
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:55:08 AM AEST
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that was powerful and so very sad, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: A Hypocondriac's Message
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:22:02 AM AEST
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Wow! this was emotionally powerful! This is a deep write!
Blessed be
~ :: darkangeleyes57 :: ~ |
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Re: A Hypocondriac's Message
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:46:51 AM AEST
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| very deep and powerful imagery... great poem * |
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Re: A Hypocondriac's Message
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:10:31 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE. It got my heart pounding my hands started to sweat. Very true words for me for I do cut.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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