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At the mirror
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I look at me at the mirror
and I see someone
born to dream,
suffer,remember.
I see again in that look
my eyes when I was a child,
deep,sweet,pleasantly strict.
Quiet my face,
pink my cheeks and my lips,
that little girl
scrutinizes me,
innocent and unconscious.
The shadows and the lights
among my dark curls
they get lost into the hair
of a distant child,
strong but forgotten,
into her determined gestures,
in her awkward but true words...
I look at myself at the mirror
and all I see
is the faded copy
of a tender little girl
who could only
dream.
Copyright ©
LostDream
... [
2002-11-20 11:00:00]
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Re: At the mirror
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:38:58 AM AEST
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| This is very nice and very nostalgic. Good! I love it! |
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Re: At the mirror
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:08:13 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done! Ireally like this peice,Real cute! Christina |
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Re: At the mirror
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:07:38 AM AEST
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Like you said, Dream..you are still very young. You have your whole life ahead... You can find that dream...you just have to believe it..and give it time...
((hugs))
Jenni |
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Re: At the mirror
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 07:32:08 PM AEST
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| I think this poem is great! |
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