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That moment
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The unchanged beauty
of that past moment
that still I feel,
vivid,
burning upon my skin,
is the endless astonishment
that your gesture
caused,
and the sudden mess
that your kiss
brought
in my young life.
In my small world,
in my gipsy heart,
that moment is close,
that moment is far.
Copyright ©
LostDream
... [
2002-11-20 11:20:00]
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Re: That moment
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:35:26 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem and... very nostalgic. Good! |
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Re: That moment
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:06:00 PM AEST
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| I liked this peice a lot,good write! Christina |
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Re: That moment
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:40:11 PM AEST
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Such deep words in such a
short write, i really liked this one
Thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: That moment
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 02:28:48 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem ... says so much. |
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Re: That moment
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:03:52 AM AEST
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So much said in so few words... love this write..
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my earlier posts...
Jenni |
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Re: That moment
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:26:09 AM AEST
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Das shonste Gedicht, gute Arbeit.
loved it.
Ali
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Re: That moment
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by TiNyOnE on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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i love you poem, i sooo can relate to it. ive tried a million times to write about my first love that i had at such a young age, and its like a have writers block on that topic cuz theres too much emotions. but your poem discribed it perfect, good write! keep em, coming
Laura
aka.. Tiny |
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