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Full Marks
Contributed by
Nessiecat
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Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Even my sweetest friends agree
that it was odd, I should succeed
and for my exams, get full marks.
It must be me whos in the dark.
So, why should I perform so well?
After all, Im just a girl
and one whos blonde and silly, too.
Theres been a mix up at the school.
Cant I see theyre ripping me off?
All students get full marks, they scoff
and all theyre after is you cash,
thats what we see, so think on that."
I sat reflecting for some time
and I say this achievements mine!
Only I know how much I put in,
the hours of thought, the studying.
I see that even my true love
doesnt think Im good enough
and in the quest Im on my own.
Maybe it will lead be home.
Copyright ©
Nessiecat
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2002-11-20 11:40:00]
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Re: Full Marks
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:02:07 PM AEST
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| This was a good write,sometimes others cant always see the great in us! As long as you know its there,that counts!Christina |
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Re: Full Marks
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:42:36 PM AEST
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I agree that other's can't always
see the great in us, this is sad in it's
own way, I really enjoyed this one
So full of reality to. Thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Full Marks
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 02:26:12 PM AEST
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Good on you! Go get 'em girl! Great poem.
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