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Death In Tears
Contributed by
crash
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:13:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I miss you
like the flower misses the rain
Each day without you
drives me insane
I sit here thinking
"how could you cause so much pain?"
I mean I have been through this before
I never cared about what was to come
I never thought I could love
How could I be so dumb?
I never realized
until I saw the tears
you were what I have been looking for
through all these years
They say spring will follow snow
but in my loneliness I feel so cold
After the drugs and the pain
I feel so old
I'm so close now
I'm almost dead
I only thought of you
as I bled
from where the bullet
left it's mark
12 gauge slug
straight through my heart
But I live still
the hole won't go away
maybe I'll try again
another shot, another day
Another tear
Another try
In all my days,
I never meant to make you cry
I'll be *****
if the next shot don't make me die
I have a loaded gun
and an empty life
if the next few shots don't work
I'll try the knife
I never wanted
to see you cry
"Please lord
just let me die!"
Copyright ©
crash
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2004-11-09 16:13:16]
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Re: Death In Tears
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:32:00 PM AEST
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wow... this was a really sad write... had me in tears... great job.
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Re: Death In Tears
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:14:05 PM AEST
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Very deep write full of heart ach and pain. It flowed very nicely in a very sad way. Tears of love flow through this write. I hope things get better. And you keep writing your thoughts so this hole will only be a spot. "NICE WRITE". "crash"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Death In Tears
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by bematt2000 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:49:29 PM AEST
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| hey dumbass its your homie matt juist writting u to say nice pome i like it |
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Re: Death In Tears
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:25:07 AM AEST
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Very deep. I can say i have had many feelings like this just in different ways. This poem was very well written and the emotions just flowed from the words you have written.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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