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Head Up Shiny Stuck
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:21:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Oh god I did it again whatever who cares I love to do it again and again and again head hurts stiff neck out the window gagging sweats shaking regrets but its not what you think that I am thinking about you're wrong like always I'm right like always head high forever in a cloud forever coming down not ever being here not there in everyones way take me away wake me in a cloud of dispair head hurts it burns the life has melted to form a puddle of love i slipped i tripped head hurts pound pound pounding now help me out help me down head head hurts Its calling i'm falling down from my cloud where my head it hurts but it rested there not here where you be take me down without my cloud to breathe in the sky is falling i'm not flying so high Im dying to get high I wish but i hate what i am to be have been are am become alive not in this place head hurts it pounds stiff neck dizzy dizzy done done now go go go go go drive fast i need to finish myself NO good bye to my cloud my cushoin my pillow catch me i'm falling it's calling fix me fix fix I need my fix head hurts hand me the needle im fixed fixed fixed in my cloud head high i'm high so high not coming down you can't reach me i am where i am to be to belong all along it was there don't ever bring me down again let me down again leave me here with my one true friend silver and comfort and sharp but sweet taking away pounding head lifting me off my feet to my cloud where i sit and am am am am alive but dead to the world head up head up don't try to bring me down I am already flying head high
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:46:43 AM AEST (User
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So you were a heroin addict, too? *confused*
You mention 'we' at the beginning. Tell me if i'm wrong, because this whole write seems rather realistic - not, of course, that I've ever been a smack addict. I know several, however . . . and I guess this may well be somewhat accurate.
Well written, if a bit vertical . . . |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:50:14 AM AEST (User
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*has read it again*
don't ever bring me down
again
let me down
again
leave me here
with my one true friend
*understands now* |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:54:44 AM AEST (User
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whoa!!! im having shivers. Jocelyn wow that was hard and real made me feel like I was the drug addict. This has a good flow and it made me shiver lol.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:51:43 AM AEST (User
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wow that was so powerful, you made us the readers feel everything,
takecaree,
pixie xx |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:19:31 AM AEST (User
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Not only a great job at putting yourself in his place, but getting it down on the page so realistically!! |
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