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Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:49:40 AM in AEST
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Your drag me to my fate
I am adorned in silk
It places me in bondage
The soft scent of Roses
Turns to the stench of decay
I attempt to stand
Pain Rakes my body
I am bound and waiting
My blood covers your hands
Yet no wound touches my body
The rantin of Satan rings in my ears
Hushed and Silent
Almost seducing me to his pleasure
His hands roam my body
Yet I am still Bound
Finger nails like knives streak my ivory skin with crimson red
The flower flames in blue white fire
These are your punishments pleasure pain
Your teasing driving me to sin
But never unwanted
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2004-11-10 06:49:40]
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Re: unknown
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by Kreeping_Beauty on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:55:07 AM AEST
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this is a good write.
=). |
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Re: unknown
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by _Raspberry_ on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 10:58:53 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is really a beautiful and dark write. I love it! |
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Re: unknown
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:27:57 AM AEST
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some of the little phases i this are deeply thoughtful and creative.
i especially like it where you put,
"Pain Rakes my body "
and,
"Finger nails like knives streak my ivory skin with crimson red" is such a beauful form of using our dark english language.
this is an interesting poem...
AND IT'S VERY WELL DONE |
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Re: unknown
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by screwup on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:09:38 PM AEST
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good write. you expressed your emotions really well. as I know what you are going through.
~screwup |
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