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Down
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:50:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Woke up down,low down there.
Alone and lost and existing nowhere.
I cry for myself,screaming inside,
In pitty and guilt I'm starving to stride.
Torment torture pushes me more,
So i close every door and i shut every pore.
invisable to sensations ive become a shadow
Hide all the feelings and dont let them show.
Bowed head dont attract attention
Dont let them see your descention
Wrapped up in woe & chains drenched in pain
I dont know why but i'm down low again.
Copyright ©
x_midnight_x
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2004-11-10 11:50:35]
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Re: Down
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:52:55 AM AEST
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that was sad, *hugs* well written,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Down
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:12:49 PM AEST
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"Hide all the feelings and dont let them show."
This is a sad poem but you express your feeling very well in it. It shows your able to write your emotions down instead of keeping them bottle up inside. Which in my opion make a "GREAT POET" x_midnight_x.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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