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Invisible Tears
Contributed by
ANDREA
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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My tears are invisible but they are there.
The reason theyre hiding is cause you dont care.
Through torture at school and break-ups from hell,
My tears were hiding, which caused you to yell.
Sadness and shame are things I hold inside,
These are two reasons from you my tears hide.
I wish you could see all the things I dont say.
If my tears werent invisible youd be okay.
All you see is the surface, the real problems hide.
When you blame me all my problems collide.
My nose isnt running and my eyes arent red,
But you cant see the tears in my head.
So one day look deeper, try to be me,
Maybe youll feel the tears you cant see.
Copyright ©
ANDREA
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2002-11-20 18:00:00]
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:38:05 PM AEST
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| nice write , i like it a lot :) ...or should i be :( |
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by gina on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:39:36 PM AEST
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| nice write , i like it a lot :) ...or should i be :( |
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:46:07 PM AEST
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It's amazing what people can't see
sometimes or that we even feel we have
to hide how we feel from someone
Thanks for sharing this one, i enjoyed
it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Invisible Tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:24:59 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Andrea.. This is a beautiful write... Hope things seem brighter soon..
Jenni |
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