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Caught in Destruction and Love
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:41:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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your the cause of my fears
of my hopes
of my tears
you bring my pain
you give my smile a glow
you have a gift to me
only you can bestow
you shatter
i cry
i live
you die
i seek love
and find only destruction
you try to hide
but your past comes out like a volcanic eruption
i want to last forever
but you say its never
how do you propose we get through
i wouldnt be here if it wasnt for you
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brokensoul
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2004-11-10 13:41:43]
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Re: Caught in Destruction and Love
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:50:02 PM AEST
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an emotional and touching write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Caught in Destruction and Love
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:00:17 AM AEST
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You should work more on the flow and structure of your poems. Nice try...
--amanda-- |
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