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Same Situation, Different Faces
Contributed by
Deathly_Rose
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:13:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Same situation, Different faces
I cared for him, like no other,
He cared for me, like a big brother.
We sat and we talked,
As our lips began to lock.
A moment of bliss,
Our first kiss.
He grabbed my hand, and lead it down.
I tried pulling back, while I frowned.
Baby come on! he said with a smirk,
I looked at him and thought what a jerk.
I cant. This is going too fast.
Just do it, youll have a blast!
I said no! I screamed and I yelled.
But my hand was tightly held.
I tried to pull back,
But confidence I lack.
He moved my hand closer, to his area down below.
I felt like crying, but tears would not show.
He moved my hand down and up,
As he went to feel me up.
I shoved him off as away I ran.
From that moment on I could never trust a man.
At that time, I needed my friend,
A shoulder to cry, she could lend.
I told her what happened, in spite of my pain,
It happened too fast, there was nothing to gain.
I went to school the very next day,
Him and I passed, with nothing to say.
I heard some talking, amongst a group.
The realities and pains, began to form a never ending loop.
He cheated on her, and used her for game
Ever since that, nothing will be the same.
Those times have passed,
Finally, at last.
It seems that Every time I fall in love, its the same situation, different faces
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Deathly_Rose
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2004-11-10 19:13:50]
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Re: Same Situation, Different Faces
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by N0body on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:53:17 PM AEST
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| Besides the sad story , i thought this piece of work was phenomenal. You were able to keep rhymning the whole time and not make it confusing. Awsome job! Keep posting! |
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Re: Same Situation, Different Faces
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:10:26 PM AEST
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| wow...i woulda kicked that guy in the balls. seriously, what an ass. you poor thing...it'll be alright. not all guys are like that :/ |
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Re: Same Situation, Different Faces
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by cocacola1331 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:32:32 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was awesome. I just read your other poem, and was not disappointed by either of the two. I really envy you and your ability to make everything rhyme without it sounding too overdone. True love is hard to find... but keep searching and you'll come across your match.... |
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Re: Same Situation, Different Faces
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:29:00 PM AEST
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| very sad but i really liked it. |
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Re: Same Situation, Different Faces
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by secretwind on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:24:18 AM AEST
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This is deep flow of the emotional torture we endure and how old wounds never really heal.
I feel ya on this one,well done.
The Wind... |
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