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Suicide
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:58:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i wanna die
i wanna be dead
i dont wanna cry in this bed
with you on my mind
theres nothing left to do
is true
i dont wanna see this place
i dont wanna see your face
suicide
i wanna die
suicide
you're so blind
suicide
i dont mind
suicide
i dont care no more
i wanna die alone
on this cold floor
dying alone
for all eturnity
i'll be alone
all eturnity
will end tomorrow
i will live no longer
i'm growing blonder
i know this is stupid
what was it you did
you made me like this
i know no one will miss
me
free i will be
flying around up there
up there its will be more fare
i will pray no more
i will care no more
suicide
i wanna die
suicide
you're so blind
suicide
i dont mind
suicide
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2004-11-10 19:58:49]
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Re: Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:36:43 PM AEST
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umm i'm not gonna say anything bc if i do u might think i'm bashen ya,but it was a nice poem but i dont like killers
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Re: Suicide
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by anonymous_skies on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:52:20 AM AEST
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| I'm sorry you feel that way...and, though I haven't felt those feelings before, I know what you're saying...and it's so sad, so depressing... I wish there was something better in your life to look forward to, something that might put a smile back in your heart. This poem really shoook me up, and...I sort of wish I could write like that, a little. |
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