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Never
Contributed by
merry
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:07:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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___________________
What couldnt be said
Those words she longed to hear
He couldnt give them to her
He was a married man
And she was not his wife
Yet something happened between them
It started with a smile
Blooming into friendship
That took them by surprise
They talked and laughed
Until desire began to yearn
Longing for release
One kiss they couldnt resist
The temptation was too much
In passions heat they wrapped themselves
Cocooned in silent dreams
Accepting this was all they had of
What could never be
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-11-10 20:07:37]
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Re: Never
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:12:07 PM AEST
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Your writes continue to amaze me.
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Re: Never
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:49:22 PM AEST
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Stitch stole my comment! I was going to say just that...
Several of your recent works have just... wow'd me. Terrific work, Merry. I'm so glad I didn't miss this one.
*hugs*
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Re: Never
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:53:33 PM AEST
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wow this write is amazing but yet the act and feelings is wrong.. but powerful write.. Peace and hope
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Re: Never
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:10:31 AM AEST
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Sometimes ( most of the time) your writes hit home with me in a way I can't explain. This one hurts to read.
Roses at the feet of my daisy
Larry |
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Re: Never
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:07:13 AM AEST
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Cocooned in silent dreams
I love that line...it take me to read your entire works!!!!
Thanks..now I won't be waiting until I can post my Vets day piece.. I've something to do now.. |
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