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Raping Me
Contributed by
screwup
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:53:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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that's it, I'm saying goodbye
life's done, I'm ready to die
I cut out my soul
to feal a little control
I use a razorblade
to make the pain fade
and to feel some relief
inspite of all my grief
inside myself, I lay screaming
cause this heart of mine is bleeding
raping me, taking my pride away
in this life I don't want to stay
beating me until I am broken
lying naked in front of you
now your life is through
you took something away from me
along with my insanidy
you ripped my clothes off
as I ripped my skin
then I let the blade sink in
you grabbed me tight
as I fought with all my might
as you released your hold
I sat there shaking, so cold
caressing my wounds
my pain and hurt
you make me feel like dirt
raoing me, enjoying my flesh
enjoying the blood that drips off to rest
you spread my legs
to tare me apart
you penentrate, to break my heart
raping me, enjoying my screams
you don't even hear them it seems
your hand covering my rigged mouth
as your other hand slips further south
your done and you push me out the door
as I sit there crying on the floor
you drive off and leave me there
as if you really cared
you left me to deal with all this pain
now I'm going so insane
even razors can't heal all the hurt you've done
I just want to get away and run
your in my nightmares
and my cries of dispair
you'll never see
all you've done to me
you pulled out the knife
and threatened to end my life
I said NO! I said DON'T!
you can stop, you just won't
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dedicated to all those that have been raped or molested...
11/02/04
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screwup
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2004-11-11 09:53:20]
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Re: Raping Me
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:59:43 AM AEST
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wow. very powerful. a true emotional poem. though im sorry u fell that way.
Best wishes
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Re: Raping Me
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by Apardame on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:00:39 AM AEST
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| This poem is beautiful. I was raped when I was younger and I know the pain that it can give you. Its really hard to get over something like that but its even harder to deal with it when it happens. You will never be the same person after it happens. Thank for this beautiful poem. Great Write!!!! |
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Re: Raping Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:02:24 AM AEST
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this is really awful, so very sad and emotional, i am so sorry,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Raping Me
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by xemptydecemberx on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:14:51 AM AEST
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really sad poem:( .. i hope you feel better. take care. remember, im here if you need to ever talk.
-jacque |
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Re: Raping Me
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:24:40 AM AEST
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| I got half way through and couldn't read any more. Brought back too many memories and that sick feeling in my stomach. The part I did read was way intense, good job of conveying emotion. |
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Re: Raping Me
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:12:39 AM AEST
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| it brought ters to my eyes... |
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Re: Raping Me
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by LEMMEN on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:14:52 AM AEST
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"VERY EMOTIONAL" " VERY WELL WRITTEN"
You capture the very soul of someone who has been raped. Your words ring so much truth so much guilt the pain the scars it leaves on someones heart and soul. The scars still to this day never fade never go away. "GREAT WRITE"" screwup"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Raping Me
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by givingin on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:51:07 AM AEST
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This is the BEST poem I have read on this site.
OMG capturing the emotions of your past, finding the courage to write about it, to tell others... Very good write!
5 no 6/5 stars.
Take care.
I'm hear if you need to talk to.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Raping Me
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:42:43 PM AEST
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| i applaud your courage..... and stand beside you in the pain..... |
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Re: Raping Me
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:08:49 PM AEST
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Hey babe...
It took alot of courage to write this... I know... believe me... I know... it's not something that u overcome overnight... It's gonna take awhile... U know I love u and am always here for u... I applaud u for sharing ur pain... who knows u may help someone by speaking out...
Love ya...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Raping Me
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:01:41 PM AEST
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| this poem was well thought out and well executed - am very impressed - lots of emotion and some sentiment within this piece - superb!! |
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Re: Raping Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:27:17 AM AEST
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My heart cracked when I started reading this...I feel for the agony you went through in writting this, by the time I reached the end, my heart bled through....soaking in sorrows agony for all the harm done to your beautiful soul...I know suffering I know pain, but rape is alien to me, yet you have hammered the nightmare you went through.....tattooed it home...My tears run red, all I can offer is a shoulder, take care always Dee.. you are in my heart
Karl |
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Re: Raping Me
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by ladymaki on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:08:08 PM AEST
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| This is amazingly wrote..it made me cry.. |
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