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The gift of your eye-sight
Contributed by
girish
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:46:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With me in the garden of flowers filled with mist
Your eye-sight gives me a many wonderful gift
But for even a great sage, it will be a ruffle
Cause still you and me remain single
Widespread your garments fill the entire park
Here you sing with the voice of a lark
Shining those twenty moons across your nails
Create the dreams of youth along the edge of eyes
When you remain
With me in the garden of flowers filled with mist
And your eye-sight gives me this wonderful gift
Gathering you in my arms, our hearts exchange
Waiting for the time to take you into my range
I remain captured with the feel of your love
And to get free, I don`t know it`s how?
When you remain
With me in the garden of flowers filled with mist
And your eye-sight gives me that wonderful gift
When I walk over the stones, I feel a pain
But for your sight, the stones turn into jasmine
If pain could turn into jasmine filled with mist
It`s your eye-sight, that gives me this wonderful gift
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girish
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2004-11-11 10:46:23]
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Re: The gift of your eye-sight
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by namesaretaken on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:34:25 AM AEST
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I find love poems hard to write because of this stigma of western masculinity that I have
This poem was very good especally if you have no experence I think the last stanza struck me the most
good stuff
Nat
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Re: The gift of your eye-sight
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by secretwind on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:35:29 PM AEST
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Ahh,Love is in thee air,sweetly done.
The Wind..... |
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Re: The gift of your eye-sight
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:48:53 PM AEST
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So heavenly beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
A person can jus bask in the beauty of your heart. |
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Re: The gift of your eye-sight
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by lonithion on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:38:48 AM AEST
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wonderful expression of love's great gift. you definetly understand what a relationship is about.
lonithion |
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Re: The gift of your eye-sight
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:49:49 AM AEST
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| wonderful expression of how you feel for sum1 thats how i feel for this guy i kno thanks~~poetrygirl1991 |
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