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Leaving
Contributed by
Dany
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:03:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Wind and water carry me,
Far away from you.
Thoughts are racing through my head,
But thoughts of you come up the most.
I'm supposed to be over you now,
And our love to be long forgotten.
But when I see you I can't help it,
The thoughts and dreams come back.
I want to leave without these thoughts,
They give me unbearable pain.
There's nothing to gain and only one thing will help,
Your love in my heart forever more.
Take me away no matter what it takes,
I don't care anymore.
If I have to end myself now,
Then the time has finally come.
Copyright ©
Dany
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2004-11-11 11:03:28]
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Re: Leaving
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by givingin on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:34:13 AM AEST
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That's a powerful sad write Dan.
I'm sorry your hurting like that.
goodwrite
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Leaving
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by Deathly_Rose on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 08:37:57 PM AEST
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wow that's a really good write dan
keep up the good work
hope that you feel better ^.^
*~Alicia~* |
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