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It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:39:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Im tired.
I dont sleep much any more.
Pains been fired.
Deep within my core.
You wont leave,
AND ITS BREAKING ME!
And I cant face him,
When me gets mad at me!
My arms are slit in a pool of filth.
All of this sickness is making me ill!
Im sorry to those who feel I have worth.
But I cant continue feeling this hurt.
I gonna fail if I continue to try.
So why not go, why not just die?
At night, I cry, my-self to sleep.
I want to die. I want to leave.
At school I laugh but scream inside.
At home when they start it makes me cry
Things are breaking and I just cant stay.
Theres no point in counseling or running away.
Theres no point in effort when Im just breaking down.
Im holding no happiness, just bleeding on the ground
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2004-11-11 11:39:22]
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Re: It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more!
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by pixie on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:41:56 AM AEST
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yes you can stay here, you have the strength to battle this, yourf poems are proof that you can do it, you are still here, fighting your troubles you are not alone hun *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more!
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by thepos on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:52:01 PM AEST
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| your poem is a little empty. Nice but, empty. I don't think you feel that way. Denial sux doesn't it? The poem seems like a poem any teen could right to make his or her friends think he or her is deferent. Ok though. |
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Re: It's time for me to go, as I can't stay here any more!
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:49:53 PM AEST
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| "My arms are slit in a pool of filth" - nice line brings vivid images to mind. Nice write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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