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Hiding Behind A Smile
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:53:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hiding behind a smile.
Pretending eveythings okay.
Wishing for every feeling I've ever had to just go away.
Taking pills.
Drinking to cover up the pain.
Suicidal thoughts hid behind shame.
Prescription after prescription, day after day.
Wanting it all to go away, hopelessly in need of self-esteem.
Tear after tear I hide behind my pain.
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addicted2selfharm
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2004-11-11 11:53:37]
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Re: Hiding Behind A Smile
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:55:43 AM AEST
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a sad write, very deep and emotional,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Hiding Behind A Smile
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:27:02 PM AEST
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wow this is very powerful.. I have been there before.. this is very sad.. glad you overcame this
awesome job
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Hiding Behind A Smile
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by thepos on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:57:23 PM AEST
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| can u get to the point!? it makes no sense. It would be a lot better if you added an ending! The rhyming needs work but, it is ok for a teen in denial to write. Same stuff I see all the time. |
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