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Sadness
Contributed by
givingin
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:53:22 PM in AEST
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Sadness will always overwhelm those who let it, it will always continue to dig within your soul, it will always consume your reality and consume the good things in your life. It will make you think that happiness never excited for you, it will make you feel smaller than a speck of grain. It will make you give into all the temptations, it will make you give up on your dreams, it will give you a reason to die, whether you want to except it or not. It clause at your back with it’s sharp nails, consuming your friends and family, you will watch as the darkness surrounds them and takes over their body’s. You will try to scream for help, but only the sound of pain will come from you. Your only escape from this pain.....................
Will be death......................
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..good bye..........
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2004-11-11 12:53:22]
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Re: Sadness
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by thepos on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:04:45 PM AEST
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| um... wow! the most bull I've ever seen! You have no clue what you just wrote down did you? Either that or your a teen in denial. "...you will watch as the darkness surrounds them and takes over their body’s..." What's darkness? Explain what darkness is in the poem. I read stuff just like this every day. No deferent than the others. tfk. tsk. tsk. That has nothing to do with what you call "reality". Ok let me tell you reality is not sad. It sux! Reality is a lot worst then sad! Keep working on your writing, too. Read what you write to make sure it makes sense... |
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Re: Sadness
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by amatt on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:29:07 PM AEST
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| yo i feel what your sayin nice poem i feel what you mean |
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Re: Sadness
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by LEMMEN on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:32:08 PM AEST
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Sadness the darkness within The darkness that surrounds us we are all born in sin. Unlike the other comment. I think you express yourself very well. The darkness is differnt to everyone but we all feel the pain. We all have sadness in our lives. Each of us deal with it differntly. You shared with us the sadness you have within. The darkness that surrounds you and the darkness that you see surounding your faimly and friends. I also read a lot of "DARK POETRY". But I have learned to read between the lines. To hear the message that is brought before in words and they don't have to rime. Your write was sad, But I have learned with time Lot's of time that the darkness dose fade away. Peace Friend may you find the way to the light and watch the darkness fade away.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Sadness
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:02:41 PM AEST
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| this pooem sucked something out of me whilst i read it - it was so damn good and true!! that i felt myself nodding along - well done!! |
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Re: Sadness
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by secretwind on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:09:08 PM AEST
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I like the way you flow,good write.
The Wind |
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