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Reality
Contributed by
rockshv
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The thoughts in my mind
Run contrary to what I see
I never thought this would happen
To face me so freely
Shocked out of spite
Driving me away
Draining out my energy
These moments are surreal
I painfully see
The accusations are pinned
Ive got nothing left
Seduce me with it again
I will be found empty
I disregard their pace
Seeking out indignity
Becoming another vulture
In a morbid state
I painfully see
The deception of it all
Dissect to fathom my soul
Facing all odds
Cornering me into oblivion
This could be my fate
Overwhelmed with the penalty
I endured to the end
Made foolish choices
I painfully see
Copyright ©
rockshv
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2002-11-20 23:00:00]
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Re: Reality
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:01:25 AM AEST
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This is so deep, it truly touched
my heart. Thanks for sharing this one
I enjoyed it alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Reality
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by sweetolbaby on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:48:20 AM AEST
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This is so deep and so true! A very good write!
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Re: Reality
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:01:10 PM AEST
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| Very deep and yet very good. |
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