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Melodie
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:08:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She sings,
A sorrowful hymn to her deceased lover
Her world, endless shadows,
Demons from her past,
Insanity close at hand
Her voice soars high,
She speaks of love and decay,
Beauty and death
A bittersweet requiem,
Coursing through the ash infested air
Fatality all around her,
Could she not consider it more than a friend?
All is lost,
And only she,
The beautiful Melodie,
Lives on
A soul-less corpse, a figment
Humming an ancient tune,
Amongst a field of marble heads
The precious Luna sacrificing Her luminosity,
And placing it in her hair
Mistress of Obscurity, was she,
This morbidly radiant Melodie
Solemn was her song,
Of past love and life
Her lovely wings were clipped long ago,
Ripped off by some ungrateful father
Never would she fly again
A love was found,
Then, subsequently lost
An existence of death, and long-lost loved ones
All alone, so dreadfully alone
Silently screaming, inwardly dying
A curse of immortality was cast upon her,
An eternal life of loneliness
Thoughts of self-destruction have long left her fevered mind,
Only concepts, memories, past recollections,
When life was good, and her world was luminous
The blind deity had not seen what occurred down below
The deaf God had not heard the blood curdling screams
Violated, stolen of innocence, beaten down by iron fists
All neglected
A victim, still tainted by HIS touch
Wallowing in a sea of nothingness,
The Melodie slowly dies,
Her song, drifting, still carried upon the winds of Death
Her heartbeat ceased,
Only silence embracing the world
The cycle begins again,
The heart lives on,
The eyes flutter to perceive this, her personal Hell
To exist in a realm where death and sorrow were her only friends
La Luna, smiling solemnly upon her,
Whispers of hope
Hope that sits waiting,
Across the vast oceans, beyond everything,
He lingers, for something, or someone, and he doesnt quite know why
The cloud of anguish hung low,
And she wept tears of gentle sorrow
With the little bit of energy she had left,
Melodie sung, for the mystery that awaited her in those distant lands
Recklessly hoping for her hymn to be heard,
To be cherished, and loved,
By that certain something, or someone,
Dwelling in a far off land
The song was carried,
Across the oceans, beyond anything and everything,
And reached the enigma
Stroking the heart and soul with celestial hands
An unfinished symphony waiting to be completed
In the darkness of the Night,
Under the sapphire orb that was her Muse,
Eternal beauty and harmonious was she,
The perpetual Mistress of Darkness, that was named Melodie
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FleurdeSang
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2004-11-11 14:08:47]
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Re: Melodie
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:32:58 PM AEST
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A melody that was heard across a vast ocean.
Your words touched my heart and soul. I am deeply honoured to read your poetry for these words are part of your life.
You and these words are worth so very much
Release the old and make way for new beginnings.
Respect and love
Magnificent my friend
Love sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Melodie
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 07:57:54 PM AEST
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| I do not pretend to understand this. When taken one by one, the words are beautiful..some things I get..then I get lost. But the vocabulary is wonderful.. it's me..I'm a dullard and I don't get this hi-brow stuff. But look..I'm here trying, and that should count for something..right? |
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Re: Melodie
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:28:56 PM AEST
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Haunting refrains echo still within the halls and empty rooms of my mind. I hear the voice and am drawn towards doors that have remained locked for ages. Testing latches, seeking ... the voice moves on wafting through the halls ... beckoning, pleading, comanding me to follow .... Melodie fades and returns and fills my dreams ... she leaves again ... she will be back.
Nazmythian ~ |
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