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Wide Eyes Face Death
Contributed by
vampy
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:17:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wide eyes,
searching for excitement,
searching for knowledge,
open to live.
Wide, green eyes,
searching for fun,
searching for growth,
open to live.
Wide eyes closing,
searching for escape,
searching for release,
closing from boredom.
Wide, green eyes closing,
searching for maturity,
searching for friendship,
closing from boredom.
Wide eyes, desiring to live,
searching for something new,
fragile, little heart, pleading,
please do not let the wide eyes close.
Copyright ©
vampy
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2004-11-11 14:17:31]
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Re: Wide Eyes Face Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:29:44 PM AEST
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Absolutely perfect, vampy!! Love it! It struck a chord, my friend! Green eyes searching for life and love...green eyes closing, desperate to get away... Green eyes closing forever... Wow. Incredible! Thank you so much for sharing this! A truly flawless piece, my friend! Excellent job. Much love! Forever,
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Re: Wide Eyes Face Death
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:45:05 PM AEST
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| I like this, vulnerable poetry, what you're searching for - what you escape by looking away. Great poem. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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