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A Lullaby
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Tell me a lullaby to make the days go by a song to hear for years that past to make the memories last
Days have come and gone and still I long for that sweet face that years will soon erase
For now Ill hold on to the years that have gone and hope that I will remember In years come September
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Re: A Lullaby
(User Rating: 1 ) by ZiltzWiltz on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 07:10:18 PM AEST (User
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thats quite beautiful. |
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Re: A Lullaby
(User Rating: 1 ) by Luinil on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:49:03 PM AEST (User
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very pretty, nice flow * |
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Re: A Lullaby
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:37:51 PM AEST (User
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It reads like a lullabye too. Nice work! Cheers! |
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