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BEST IN LIFE
Contributed by
LEMMEN
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:01:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He wants to lift her up.
Show her a world that is better
Show her a world that is alive.
With life
With love.
Bring her to a place she has never really seen before.
Bring her to a place she has never known before.
She has lifted him up
She has shown him that love does exist
She has shown him that someone does care
She has brought him to a better place.
His dream has come true within her
He just hopes he can fulfill her dreams
Of love
Of life
As she has done for him.
He wants to lift her up
To that place she has brought him to
Show her the world
Give her the world.
Tend to her every request
Just to let her know she is the best in life
He has ever known.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-11-11 22:01:54]
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Re: BEST IN LIFE
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:21:12 PM AEST
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Very sweet.......
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Re: BEST IN LIFE
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:37:42 PM AEST
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so very sweet... liked this poem a lot... great write...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: BEST IN LIFE
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by givingin on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:38:25 AM AEST
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Aww.... how sweet.
it's very good.
I almost feel jeliouse..... |
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Re: BEST IN LIFE
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by Spike on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:15:34 PM AEST
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A pure and honest tribute to real love - the desire not to self satisfy, but to make another person feel loved and fulfilled. I really enjoyed this one, Dennis.
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Re: BEST IN LIFE
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:26:41 AM AEST
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Very very good!! I can relate to this so much because I am wishing to help my Best friend andrew see through to what there is then what he makes himself believe.. Very good!
~ :: darkangeleyes57 :: ~ |
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