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I Like It Like That
Contributed by
secretwind
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I've been looking for a lover
someone just for me
the kind of lover
like no other
a sweet fantasy,
visions of ecstasy
got me back on track
fascination in temptation
Oh yeah
I like it like that.
look love in the eye
slowly bump and grind
Oh I start to sweat
so sweet so wet
can't wait for what comes next,
love the way that love shakes me
it feels so good
I get so high
as innervisions drift
I smile I sigh.
Fun boy one
on the run
looking for fun
searching for a spark
a flame
a fire
the one I desire,
anticipation flows
in rifts of sensation
I slowly begin to crack...
adventures into thee unknown
Oh yeah
I like it like that.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-11-12 04:25:51]
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by Row on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:32:03 AM AEST
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| u've done a real nice job with the rhyming, it really flows well. know how ya feel, u'll meet some dude soon enough |
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by girish on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:46:48 AM AEST
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like me? read my last poem the poem on love if u find that nice love me.
girish |
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by Kie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:51:05 AM AEST
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This was a joy to read! It was so smooth and had a great rhythm to it.
Well done!
May you find the person you need, hope so.
kIe |
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by givingin on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:50:24 AM AEST
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Very good, it flows well.
You have good skills, keep up the great work!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:54:24 AM AEST
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a really great write, wonderful write., a pleasure to read,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:27:17 PM AEST
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| You've found me. |
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:00:28 PM AEST
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Wow!
Guess that cuts me out. smilin.
U got um all wound up now.
Ofcourse u keep me wound up.
Great write.
So u lookin 4 luv huh?
Awesome masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: I Like It Like That
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by QueenEEliz33 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:48:57 PM AEST
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| Your poem really flows and I love the part when you say oh yeah i like it like that, its so chic |
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