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Colour My Days
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:18:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There are days when colours are bright
But not many of them I see day or night
Mostly darker colours of black and grey
If only the colours would lighten up my way
I guess the shade is the colour the eye depicts
I wonder if I lightened up, how the colours would mix
Mmm summer fruits and passion red
But I always see others instead
Well it seems for now I just see in one shade
But I hope through the night, the light will raze
The colours will brighten and the eyes wont see haze
And my eyes will be perfected to see brighter days
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Re: Colour My Days
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:30:11 AM AEST
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very well expressed write,I hope that you see some brighter days soon, *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Colour My Days
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by Kie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:38:56 AM AEST
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This was filled with colors and hope.
a very nice piece to read.
Well done.
Kie |
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Re: Colour My Days
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:59:44 AM AEST
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may we all look forwards to the next pink sunset no matter the day.. wonderfully expressed feelings:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Colour My Days
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:02:31 PM AEST
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| wow thank you for all the comments I apprecaite it. you are a very talented writer as well, and I know you know that. well keep up the good wrok Ill be checking out some more of your pieces. |
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