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You Make My Blood Run Cold
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:20:37 AM in AEST
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You really so make my blood run cold,
Down the stream of insanity you have been sold,
The sick things that you do day after day,
Make my stomach churn I dont know what to say.
What made you the way that you are?
I know your soul carries an eternal scar,
I know you have stared into the face of death,
For so long wanted to take your last breath.
You have hated everyone who has entered your life,
Flirted like mad with the edge of a knife,
You have laughed in the face of so much danger,
Hated your mother for being a stranger.
The only person that I have ever feared is you,
Because I have seen just what you can do,
I have seen the way your mind just flips,
Away from reality & sanity you can slip.
You always thought that rape was your fault,
Didnt like the hand youd been dealt,
There are so many things that make me cringe,
Show to me that you are totally unhinged.
My blood runs cold when I see your face,
I see all your rage that you have misplaced,
Over the years you have created so much pain,
The reason you scare me is because I think youre insane
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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold
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by Corona on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:24:32 AM AEST
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| This is soooo great!! Good wrtiting!! |
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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:34:54 AM AEST
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an emotional and powerful write. well done.
Johnny. |
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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:45:44 AM AEST
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i believe all of us feel like this at one time or another, like a subliminal convo with our own madness, this is the best poem i ever read under this topic, so human, deeply powerfully written, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold
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by givingin on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:01:06 PM AEST
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wow pixie, that was a great write!
I feel your pain sometimes.
When I read your poems they always hit the heart.
Well done!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold
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by little_genna on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:19:17 PM AEST
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I felt this one so much, maybe its because i had an internal fight with myself earlier......
This is a great poem though the content may be considered a little strange but i love it!
take care of yourself
Gen xx |
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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold
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by inoc on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 06:00:28 AM AEST
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It is good that you can release all those feelings in poem form...
it probably helps you
remember
God Loves You
but I guess you know that?
I can't speak for everyone but I think the majority of people do think you are GREAT
[I can tell by all the reads you get and the comments and most of all how terrific you are at commenting on others,,,thanks Pixie]
cheers!~ PIXIExoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo |
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