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Lying Between The Thick Air of Darkness
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:45:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Well watch the stars shine Lying between the thick air of darkness Holding one another Feeding off our most inner desires Stalking each others moves Eyes watery with our most passionate faults Faults of you and me Whispers that are so sudden Shivering beneath our skin Crying to get out and breathe Needing airneeding life Thriving off each others shivering breath As the steam blows through the air The moon slowly passes us by Leaving the stars behind To glisten in our watery eyes So coldso warm Speaking through our skin That whispers so silently Between the thick air of darkness That we lye between
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Re: Lying Between The Thick Air of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:47:55 AM AEST (User
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a very beautiful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Lying Between The Thick Air of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Angel_Eyez on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:32:10 AM AEST (User
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i really like this one it feel intimate - very clever i think
well done
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