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My Lucid Dream
Contributed by
justjonesy
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:47:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We arrive in a rushing lucid dream
falling stars and angel's dust
this trip has no particular theme
Our indefinate and unconscious state
is blown away to a dream-like ecstasy
seduce the colours and clean the slate
Racing all the vibrant lights and shapes
leaving behind only a current and a concept
infinite is flying without capes
A flicker of light radiates in the air
psychadelic signal fire above our heads
our alertness has never been so bare
But we awake from our coma to needles & pins
numbness followed by clouded pictures & memories
amnesia is the hangover for our sins
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justjonesy
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2004-11-13 00:47:21]
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Re: My Lucid Dream
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by Rxqueen on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:22:08 AM AEST
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| I liked this. Made me feel like I was trippin or something... It was way cool. Your use of language was exceptional. |
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