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blood maniac
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Deep inside me... the pain rises.
On the outside... the tears flow.
My soul burns with hate.
And evil spills from my utmost being.
I grab the knife... I turn the blade.
Run it over my finger, blood flows out and I know it's right.
I've got my arm, I take the knife,
Push it into the flesh and see what I've become.
Murderous rampage against myself.
Slicing away my only hope for salvation.
Burn under the pressure, time to cry a timeless age.
And I bleed for this pitiful me.
The knife goes deep and envy flows out,
Like I wanted to be and love.
My crowded mind aches and creaks as the knife kills away my arms.
Only a body... a scar raped body.
Only a mind... a mind too far gone.
The peace from the blood maniac is welcome.
The sleep that night will last for all time.
And the blood maniac took her last life.
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2004-11-13 13:59:03]
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Re: blood maniac
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:53:26 PM AEST
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That was a WONDERFUL poem! I didn't want to look away from it. I nearly got lost in the words. Brilliant, darling! Absolutely amazing! You described it SO well and SO beautifully. Kuddos! I wish you stregnth and hope.
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