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The Note

Contributed by jishes_4_ever on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:23:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Sometimes i may doubt our relationship
Because of what people say
But somehow you always convince me
Your love for me is true

People say "He just wants to get in your pants"
I say ***** you to them
How the hell do they know what you want
But then again how do I

You tell me that you want me
Not sex
Yes you're a physical person
But you want me and nothing else

I love it when you say you love me
And I love to tell you I love you too
To be with you makes so happy
And everytime I talk to you make me smile

I hate to think of what'd I'd be without you
I've told you about all my trust issues
But somehow you've gain my trust
And I can't help but believe you

And I can't help but believe what you wrote to me was true
The note you said I should read
So that I wouldn't doubt you
Or what you wanted out of our relationship

This note:

To tha one I love I know u may not think my feelings r 100% but they r i love tha way u can make me smile with out trying tha way u can take a joke tha kindness u have within urself that matches ur beauty on tha outside and tha way u treat others i do love u and though i don't get tha time with u i want it will come to us

That is something I will look at whenever I doubt us
Even looking at it now I can't help but smile
You're the only one who has this power over me
The power to love someone so much that I can't breath

I love your smile
I love your voice
I love your heart
I love the things you say

I love your shortness
I love it when you hold my hand
I love it when you kiss me
But most of all I love you





Copyright © jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-11-13 21:23:09]
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Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:51:52 PM AEST
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fantastic write.


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:38:34 AM AEST
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Great write hun


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:14:01 PM AEST
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Hey grlie!...i luv this 1....especially since i kno exactly who its bout....hehe...im so glad you showed me this site...i luv ur stuff MuaH*....lylasa 4ever

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