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all by myself
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:35:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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trying to forget everything in the past
knowing for so long
I will never forget
Time is of the essance
I feel myself slipping away
what to think
when thoughts come in jumbles
and nothing turns out right
I feel myself
g o i n g
c r a z y
sitting in my room
crying at night
wondering what is going on
How have things gotten so complicated
how have things turned out this way
(g o i n g c r a z y in my room)
I feel time under my feet
walking with me
as slowly as it can
(goi ng cr a zy in my room)
i sit in a corner and wonder when i will
get up and walk out
I feel a pressure in my chest
and try to find out
what is pressing so hard
I can not breathe
(goo ing crra zy in m y room(
time can not tell how lonely i have become
So lonely
)goi nng craaz y in my ro o m)
all by my self...
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2004-11-13 22:35:18]
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Re: all by myself
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by Fairy on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:06:11 PM AEST
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| You're not by yourself, I assure you there are people in your life that care about you, people who you might not even realize know your name. If you do not reach out consistantly to others, then what would make others reach for you? You must do for others what you want done for yourself.. you need a hug? Hug someone esle. Need someone to listen to you, to understand your complicated thoughts? Then sit down and listen to someone elses troulbles.. See where I'm going with this? I'm sorry about your downfall, keep your head up.. |
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Re: all by myself
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:39:18 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i think everyone is crazy, its just to the extent that matters. which means that everyone is normal, its just to an extent. |
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