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Somebody Out There
Contributed by
xlostwithoutyoux
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:17:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Doesnt anybody care
About these feelings I have
These feelings..
Theyre eating away at my soul
Its funny how a simple pull of the trigger
Could blast away all
Your memories and worries
I lay here thinking,
Theres somebody out there waiting for me..
Theres somebody out there who is that
Special person Ive always wanted.
Looking in the mirror at my troubled face,
I hold a pistol up to my temple
thinking,
Do I really deserve what ive been given?
Am I really a horrible person that
Should just leave everyone alone?
I collaspe onto the floor,
I then realize,
That there is someone,
my reason,
my reason for living.
I lay there on the cold hard floor
Waiting to die
When my phone starts ringing
ring..ring..ring..
I get the nerve to answer it,
while bleeding to death I answer,
"hello.."
I try and explain
while going through so much pain
I confess my love to him
Then slowly..disappear..
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2004-11-13 23:17:46]
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Re: Somebody Out There
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:29:02 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write. written well. this had some very nice twists in it. |
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Re: Somebody Out There
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by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:42:25 AM AEST
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very deep and moving, yes someone does care *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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