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To Tear Down What We Once Were
Contributed by
abet
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 04:37:23 AM in AEST
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I am petrified,
The sanity of my being,
Corrupted by It
Slowly sucking me in
I try to fight It.
But I know
We are fighting a losing battle
A war decided even before we fought it
A war that has defeated those before us
And soon it will defeat us as well
But for now we continue to fight
And with the dignity left in us
We fight for freedom
For the dream of freedom
That slowly escapes our grasps.
And soon we will be a part of It
Forgetting our own struggles
Destroying the dreams
Of those that we used to be
Of those who hold on
Those who grasp
The light inside that used to be ours.
Copyright ©
abet
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2004-11-14 04:37:23]
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Re: To Tear Down What We Once Were
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:40:23 AM AEST
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Lots of depth here. Anyone who has been through this kind of death could relate.
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Re: To Tear Down What We Once Were
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:13:59 AM AEST
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I think I felt my heart break all over again. Wow did this have an impact.
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Re: To Tear Down What We Once Were
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:28:24 PM AEST
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Wow the feeling in this, even though i am slighty tipsey i still felt the depth of this poem hit me with so much force.
Good first write
Take care
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Re: To Tear Down What We Once Were
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 10:28:36 AM AEST
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Deep.. Full of depth and power..
Take care
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Re: To Tear Down What We Once Were
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 05:08:20 AM AEST
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| I really like this. Wished you had more than one poem on here |
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