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Last Words
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:21:10 AM in AEST
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Blood all over my body,
Memories from the past,
This depression is taking over me,
Its all going by so fast.
I can't remeber my name,
I don't know who i am,
Everything is changing,
My head is spinning round.
Just take one last look,
One last look at me,
This is what you have done,
Will you ever regret a thing?
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
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2004-11-14 09:21:10]
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Re: Last Words
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by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:28:09 AM AEST
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very dark and depressing, hope that you have many more words to come,
takecare,
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Re: Last Words
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:03:45 AM AEST
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Well I was moved so much that a comment (an intelligent one) is not forthcoming.
I think the aspect that bothered me the most was the thought that another could cause so much pain that one would end their life. Yet the person who caused the pain just goes on living.
When you balance it on scales it gives a new perspective.
Yes this is dark and depressing but well written.
Kie |
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