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MY TRUE MADONNA
Contributed by
lemmen
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:45:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My mind is always thinking
Of just the right words to say
But every time I speak
The words they just fall away.
I tell you that I LOVE YOU
But theres more I need to say
You are my true MADONNA
You saved my life this day.
You mean to me so much
more than words could
ever say.
You are an angel that
GOD has sent my way.
No one else has ever meant
more to me than you
With exception for my mother
Who is now with GOD this day
I know she would adore you
and your pleasant ways.
There is just so much
I wish to say.
But every time I speak the words
just fall away.
I LOVE YOU
More than life itself
You shall always be my pride and joy.
You are my TRUE MADONNA
You saved my life
And I shall love you always.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-11-14 10:45:08]
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Re: MY TRUE MADONNA
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by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:46:32 AM AEST
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aww how sweet, your wife will love this,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: MY TRUE MADONNA
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by Deathly_Rose on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:53:39 AM AEST
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Hey!! oh my god, that was one of the best poems I have read, I love reading your poems, you put so much feeling and thought into what you write. I'm very happy for you, and I thank Madonna for being there for you when you needed it most ^.^ hope you two have a great life!
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: MY TRUE MADONNA
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:45:37 PM AEST
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ANother great write. I think that you know what true love is and how hard it is to find the wrods when there is no words for it. I know exactly how this feels and i think your wife will adore you for it even though there is no words to really describe how you feel.
* hugs *
Blessed be
~ :: darkangeleyes57 :: ~ |
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Re: MY TRUE MADONNA
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by KarlaMarie on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 11:05:07 PM AEST
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this was so beautiful, thank you for sharing
KarlaMarie |
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