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Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:56:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Haunted by the shadows of days past,
Over my soul darkness is cast,
I try to run away but I feel trapped,
Right inside the demons I find myself wrapped.
All I want is for them to leave my side,
I long to find a place in which I can hide,
But the shadows follow my every move,
Pushing me deeper into this blackened groove.
Why does yesterday keep haunting me so?
Maybe its because I just cant let go,
But I dont know how to I am too weak,
All my horrors come out in my sleep.
My dreams are painted with the colour black,
I am trapped way down in this crack,
I long to crawl out pull myself together,
Keep out of my soul the cold & rainy weather.
I try to scream but its caught in my throat,
I try to shout but I begin to choke,
My mind is left in a terrifying place,
There are only bad things left to laugh in my face.
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pixie
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2004-11-14 13:56:58]
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 02:01:08 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem...
i really enjoyed reading it...
Great write...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:49:08 PM AEST
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| Wow this was great. Deep and dark..very emotional, i liked reading it. Great Write! |
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 04:05:57 PM AEST
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| my mind is left in a terrifying place......why yes it is......i know of this place......yesterday can be quite cruel ....even to tomorrow...... |
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by N0body on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:13:20 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, flows well too. |
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:02:49 PM AEST
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| Good job pix..it gave me an idea..I misread something and even misreading it was soo good I'm going to use it. ya know..I thought pixies were happy..like tink.. |
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:41:47 PM AEST
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great job....i loved it
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by pander on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:42:47 AM AEST
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This is a wonderfully dark write! It takes the reader deep into a very vivid nightmare.
Well done Pixie!
Another excellent poem.
Luv,
Pander
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Re: Haunted By Shadows Of Yeterday
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:25:06 AM AEST
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Words that relate to what I am going through right now pixie. That dark place where hands reach for the sun. I hope you find your sunshine
Brilliant poem
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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