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i live a lie
Contributed by
lacymaeflower
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:40:38 PM in AEST
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Yes I live a lie
this smiley happy-go-lucky outside is a facade
really i am dark and miserable
but no one wants to talk about that
so i smile and nod to your stupid trivial conversations
Once I bared my soul to the world and it laughed at me
Now I live a lie
I comply to the norm of falsity
for your amusement and my protection
I will live a lie
until that final moment when I die
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lacymaeflower
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2004-11-14 18:40:38]
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Re: i live a lie
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by neglected1 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:43:36 PM AEST
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i see a pattern stirring up in your writing.. do you really want to die? i sure hope not you have alot going for you and.. you are a very talented writer..
dont live in a lie anymore.. obviously its killing you within so let it out.. cant be assamed of living your life how it was meant to be
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Re: i live a lie
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:45:02 PM AEST
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| good write..but don't live a lie. that's never good for anyone. |
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Re: i live a lie
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by Unheard_Mute on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:50:00 PM AEST
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| your words rang true, I'm sorry the world laughed at your exposed feelings, that you were forced to withhold them inside. It's similar to my problem, except it's that I never let my feelings free, they've always been inside. Good luck to you, I hope you feel better... |
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